It was a pleasant first date
So many years late.
By then it was for sure
To start a life together.
Although we longed to hear
Explain each other
No words got on tongue
I only had this poem sung.
You are my soul
Who fell in love
With the prince of Haden
It’s me queen Venus
The moon’s maiden
All around me
Seem to be in glaze
All that I see
Turned to be your face
How did I tame
My words to be sweeter
All with your name
How long would I hanker
Although my eyes
Have lost their lids
Dreams that spice
Have moistened my beds
Where have they gone
My sleep and my hunger
You are my dawn
Who made me a songster
Laughed to myself
Gone crazy I wondered
Anger would help
Your thoughts when hindered
When will your arms
Show me you are warm
One million swarms
Would rush through my swamp
What will I do
If you keep me away
Will buy you the heaven
Just glance me a sway
I am your heart
And you are my soul
Don’t keep us apart
Death charges the toll
Wednesday, August 6, 2008
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14 comments:
dude nice poem :-)
thnks for visting ma blog!!
Hi welcome to the blog world....u write lovely prose as well as poetry...keep up the good work! and thx for ur comments on my blog :)
Thanks for dropping by! I live in India, that's where I went fishing :)
I'm not an expert on poetry so I won't try and analyze your post! Welcome to blogger!
Very sweet one !!
I am your heart
And you are my soul
Don’t keep us apart
Death charges the toll
These were the best !!
Hi,
Thats very beautiful.. keep it up.
Thanks for dropping by my blog and keep blogging.
Nice poem Varsha. Welcome to the bloggers world. Happy blogging.
Nice one ..keep it up...
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That's a nice poem Varsha. My best wishes for you and your blog.
Ah..Lovely..
It was a pleasant first date
So many years late.
By then it was for sure
To start a life together.
Loved these lines..naturally put across..
And the lines that follow it are heartfelt..and so very mushy..
Nice and profound..
Keep them coming..
God Bless.:)
its the simplicity that caught me..
Remember these words?
"To be or Not to be" How simple .. yet how complex??
Kudos 4 u..
Wow!! Very well written. Long time since I read a romance poem that was actually good!!
Thanks to all of you for visiting my blog. Hope I would keep upto your interests.
Therez no words to explain how good this poem is...
just enjoyed every word with its background meaning and the feelings they give.. fantastic..!
thnx for a lovely WORD TREAT for me..
again, thnx for reading my blog too..
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