Wednesday, August 6, 2008

On my First Date

It was a pleasant first date
So many years late.
By then it was for sure
To start a life together.
Although we longed to hear
Explain each other
No words got on tongue
I only had this poem sung.

You are my soul

Who fell in love
With the prince of Haden
It’s me queen Venus
The moon’s maiden

All around me
Seem to be in glaze
All that I see
Turned to be your face

How did I tame
My words to be sweeter
All with your name
How long would I hanker

Although my eyes
Have lost their lids
Dreams that spice
Have moistened my beds

Where have they gone
My sleep and my hunger
You are my dawn
Who made me a songster

Laughed to myself
Gone crazy I wondered
Anger would help
Your thoughts when hindered

When will your arms
Show me you are warm
One million swarms
Would rush through my swamp

What will I do
If you keep me away
Will buy you the heaven
Just glance me a sway

I am your heart
And you are my soul
Don’t keep us apart
Death charges the toll

14 comments:

initialm said...

dude nice poem :-)

thnks for visting ma blog!!

Sowmya :) said...

Hi welcome to the blog world....u write lovely prose as well as poetry...keep up the good work! and thx for ur comments on my blog :)

Anju said...

Thanks for dropping by! I live in India, that's where I went fishing :)

I'm not an expert on poetry so I won't try and analyze your post! Welcome to blogger!

Hari said...

Very sweet one !!

I am your heart
And you are my soul
Don’t keep us apart
Death charges the toll

These were the best !!

Rituraj said...

Hi,

Thats very beautiful.. keep it up.

Thanks for dropping by my blog and keep blogging.

shri ramesh sadasivam said...

Nice poem Varsha. Welcome to the bloggers world. Happy blogging.

sharevivek said...

Nice one ..keep it up...
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Srini said...

That's a nice poem Varsha. My best wishes for you and your blog.

!nversed Poignancy! said...

Ah..Lovely..

It was a pleasant first date
So many years late.
By then it was for sure
To start a life together.


Loved these lines..naturally put across..

And the lines that follow it are heartfelt..and so very mushy..
Nice and profound..
Keep them coming..
God Bless.:)

RVND said...

its the simplicity that caught me..
Remember these words?
"To be or Not to be" How simple .. yet how complex??
Kudos 4 u..

2+2=5 said...

Wow!! Very well written. Long time since I read a romance poem that was actually good!!

VarshaVijay said...

Thanks to all of you for visiting my blog. Hope I would keep upto your interests.

GopiKrish said...
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GopiKrish said...

Therez no words to explain how good this poem is...

just enjoyed every word with its background meaning and the feelings they give.. fantastic..!

thnx for a lovely WORD TREAT for me..

again, thnx for reading my blog too..